my old controlling point is the balance of information and personal experiences are key to remembering who we are and maintaining our usefulness in an age of point and information.
for my new controlling point, after reading my essay i feel my controlling point works i just need to maintain it thoughout my essay
when writing my essay over the weekend ive revised my introduction and im going to stick with it
In Charles Baxter’s “ shame and forgetting in the information age” shows that the modern print age and information is taking over our minds, and is destroying our ability to have personal experiences or remember them. Both information and personal experience have a place in our personality and intellect. A combination of both balance out the feeling of shame of being inadequate in the information age, and overloading on information, leading to forgetting or not being able to have personal experiences. This balance is key to remembering who we are, and maintaining our usefulness in an age of print and information.
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